Floetry

Search Sort Posts:  Oldest to newest Newest to oldest

07-01-2008, 5:01 PM teller Joined on 06-10-2006 77038 Posts 17 This ain't easy You put me in a chokehold And tell me to breathe easy But baby believe me this ain't easy Ooh look how you do me You come then you go The more I fall the more u let go Beg you to stay but you leave me Ooh look how you tease me Believe me this ain't easy What will it take for u to be wit me Cuz unlike the others only u can please me Ooh do u understand what u do to me Choking me harder But telling me to breathe freely  Believe me this ain't easy The closer I get the further you go You give me what U want but I want more Tell u i need u but u head for the door Ooh look how u treat me Baby believe me this aint easy Maybe ur heart still longs for another She's the past, i wanna be ur new lover Can't desire me if ur stuck on her Ooh look how u share me Baby believe me this aint easy Why wont u just be with me? -Make this easy- MS.ASHLEE    Report

07-04-2008, 12:18 PM K-JiO Joined on 05-27-2006 90043 Posts 50 Re: This ain't easy Poetry -- more often then not -- is either a reflection of what the writer is experiencing or what the writer has seen in others. If this case is the former rather than the latter ... you're giving up your power to a person who -- in the end -- is manipulating you and is having fun doing so. I suppose it ain't easy. This is a compelling write in so much that your situation is the situation of many who chose to give their power away to keep someone who'd rather go elsewhere.    Report

07-29-2008, 7:04 PM asIam Joined on 02-02-2007 28545 Posts 916 Re: This ain't easy Wow, a very sad truth that K-Jio stated...But I want you to know that your worth more then the struggle to chase a drive by lover you deserve the desire and passion of another, you must be priceless to yourself first if ever you expect another to overstand your worth. Peace and blessings. (love your honesty) To be sure, an ordinary passerby would think that my rose looked just like you--the rose that belongs to me. But in herself alone she is more important than all the hundreds of you other roses: because it is she that I have watered.    Report

Floetry » Poet's Corner » Original Poems » This ain't easy

(please select) Forums Home |- Search Forums |- Active Topics |- Unanswered Posts User Options |- Sign In |- Join this community |- Forgot Password All Things Floetry |- The Music |- The Shows |- The Floacist |- The Songstress Poet's Corner |- Original Poems |- Favorite Poems