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07-14-2008, 5:30 PM HEAVILYsedated Joined on 12-13-2007 32907 Posts 46 Alone With You There my evenings were spent alone// standing still in the middle of a quiet storm but you'd be there// and you'd walk up and say things to my pores// kissing my soul// stroking my hand// you'd whisper words into my ear like sugar cube raindrops melting// falling// seaping through the holes in the pavement// i stood there and you read a poem to my hair, the blatant storm of ethnicity that you loved to run your hands through// so you'd be there// but i always stood alone in the midst of my quiet storm while you admired my physicality and ignored the rest of me    Report

08-07-2008, 1:29 AM Sunrise Joined on 06-01-2008 44120 Posts 7 Re: Alone With You There ...it's like missing someone so much and they are sitting right next to you! I totally felt that! Imagination is the one weapon in the war against reality. - Jules    Report

08-08-2008, 4:02 AM asIam Joined on 02-02-2007 28545 Posts 916 Re: Alone With You There  HEAVILYsedated wrote: my evenings were spent alone// standing still in the middle of a quiet storm but you'd be there// and you'd walk up and say things to my pores// kissing my soul// stroking my hand// you'd whisper words into my ear like sugar cube raindrops melting// falling// seaping through the holes in the pavement// i stood there and you read a poem to my hair, the blatant storm of ethnicity that you loved to run your hands through// so you'd be there// but i always stood alone in the midst of my quiet storm while you admired my physicality and ignored the rest of me   Lovely!!! Peace and blessings to ya! To be sure, an ordinary passerby would think that my rose looked just like you--the rose that belongs to me. But in herself alone she is more important than all the hundreds of you other roses: because it is she that I have watered.    Report

08-22-2008, 5:27 PM HEAVILYsedated Joined on 12-13-2007 32907 Posts 46 Re: Alone With You There yay Sunrise! i'm so glad u got it you understood the piece : ]    Report

08-22-2008, 5:30 PM HEAVILYsedated Joined on 12-13-2007 32907 Posts 46 Re: Alone With You There thanx asIam! peace and blessings in return    Report

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