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Original Poems
Started by Sunrise at 06-02-2008 7:25 AM. Topic has 5 replies.
 
 
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06-02-2008, 7:25 AM
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Sunrise

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Reflecting on answers of questions asked
~ Clarity revealed of those words said in the past~
“ If I let love welcome you there’s no reversal -no veering off the path”~
Those words you said have now defined how long this destiny would last~
Some choose the one of least resistance – I chose the less traveled path~
Wandering- through those bed ridden entrances searching for that key~
Questioning –Is happiness really locked inside orgasm one, two and three???
~Clarity revealed of the those words said in the past~
Unfortunately the path to our destiny has always been moderately overcast~
Darkness and secrets- they detoured us from the start~
Happiness and honesty once the same path have now split apart~
“Suppress your feelings – share your heart – how could you?” ~
Destiny revealed that you would never be able to choose~
Clearly seeing there’s no path left untaken –nothing more to do~
Looking at the sunrise – reflecting on this journey with my Muse
Imagination is the one weapon in the war against reality. - Jules
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06-04-2008, 8:00 AM
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just@sfine

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I love it. My thoughts put in words. I felt this.
Be true to yourself. If you are true to yourself You already have The upper hand in life
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06-06-2008, 5:43 AM
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NoOneda

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when i seen the name i knew it was you--much love baby!
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07-29-2008, 6:54 PM
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asIam

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I love the ending to this, nice write. Peace and Blessings to ya!
To be sure, an ordinary passerby would think that my rose looked just like you--the rose that belongs to me. But in herself alone she is more important than all the hundreds of you other roses: because it is she that I have watered.
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07-31-2008, 11:02 AM
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Sunrise

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...thanks for the feedback - much appreciated.
Imagination is the one weapon in the war against reality. - Jules
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07-31-2008, 11:03 AM
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Sunrise

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...quit trying to know me - I'm not that predictable!
Imagination is the one weapon in the war against reality. - Jules
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