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Original Poems
Started by HEAVILYsedated at 07-16-2008 11:06 AM. Topic has 3 replies.
  
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 07-16-2008, 11:06 AM
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HEAVILYsedated
 
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when i fall/// your brown hands seem to spring out from the darkness/// and you catch me/// when i fall, the eyes of my enemies glimmer/// the blood in my viens simmer because once again, i've proven myself weak/// i'm fragile and i need the guidance that comes from the grip of your fingers/// sweeping away my flaws/// cause when i fall, the shadows of my past surface again and only you can chase my demons/// when i fall, my candle is un-lit
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07-25-2008, 9:44 AM
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im:)nappy
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I like. Im guilty.
You were meant to prosper. So.......whats stopping you?
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08-22-2008, 5:23 PM
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HEAVILYsedated
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thanx, glad u liked it : ]
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09-16-2008, 6:53 PM
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asIam
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You say so much in so little lines! I could comment for days, most deff do i relate! Often i try to portray the light of the world an be that light and sometimes... i blow my own flame out! The hands that catch me though can only be those of my Savior cuz sometimes i fall so deep and so fast that those around me me cant tell because im physically upright and spiritually on my last breath and God says Not so. Loved this I think im a fan now :) PEace!
To be sure, an ordinary passerby would think that my rose looked just like you--the rose that belongs to me. But in herself alone she is more important than all the hundreds of you other roses: because it is she that I have watered.
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