Fix me
Original Poems
Fix me
HEAVILYsedated
08-22-2008, 5:58 PM
Fix me. Blur any legible mistakes with a couple swipes of your eraser. Alter me. Like a movie digitally restored to look brighter and more pleasing to the eye. Like a picture photo-shopped to perfection without any detection of the true flaws that lie under. Remake me. Back to the drawing board where you can pencil in your preferences of I, until you can find something plausible, something worth praising that resembles your outline of what I should be. You can fix me. Redefine me. Spell my name backwards and draw a new image and I’ll still be me. The way I was yesterday. Last year, and the many days before.
Re: Fix me
asIam
09-16-2008, 6:44 PM
Hey lady :) I enjoyed this read right here. Its funny how people desire sometimes to be with you only to change you into the "you" that they want you 2 b. I like the fact that you display your knowledge and acceptance of self in the end. the spelling the name backwards was creative. Peace and blessings!
To be sure, an ordinary passerby would think that my rose looked just like you--the rose that belongs to me. But in herself alone she is more important than all the hundreds of you other roses: because it is she that I have watered.